this is one of my first stories, bear with me and my mistakes because it is unedited. hopefully i will find time again to edit it but for the time being try to understand.
once upon a time there was a little robot who was given the gift of a heart in exchange to go on a quest to find the most beautiful flower of the land. as the little robot searched he came upon many beautiful flowers but none were the right one, as the journey grew longer and longer, his hope started dying and his heart turned colder and colder until there was a layer of ice surrounding it. so, the little robot feeling nothing but the cold from his heart kept wandering on. one day he came upon an unfamiliar valley filled with many flowers as he started shifting through like usual he came across one little flower that looked so delicate he was afraid to touch it..at this he carefully watched the flower for many days and nights just to observe its strength, as he did this the flower became more and more beautiful to him with each passing day. one day he decided to finally touch the flower, at this the flower turned to ash and died, the lonely little robot did not know what to do, he felt so guitly for killing the little flower that he was beside himself with a feeling he had never felt before. he could feel his heart giving off a loud thump in his chest and he could feel the ice around it breaking, and suddenly he knew exactly what he had to do. he ripped open his metal exterior until he finally reached the heart, then with wires haning everywhere and metal scraps thrown to the side he dug inside himself and took the heart out ever so carefully, making sure not to break it. when he had it placed firmaly in his hands he knew he had only a few seconds before all of his systems completly shut down, so with his quickest and swiftest of movements he placed the heart in the center of the ash and buried it with the dead flowers remains. at this the now heartless little robot fell over as all of his systems shut down. when the heart was buried in the ash, a new form started to grow, and out of it came a human girl. and inside of the girl beat the heart that the lonely, heartless, little robot gave up to give the flower life again. the girl put her hands over her heart and breathed in her first breath as she felt her heart beat. when she opened her eyes she looked around at her breath-taking suroundings, and then saw the little robot lying in a pile of ice. the girl gasped at the sight of her savior and knelt down next to him to see what had become of this little robot. when she touched the little robot his hard metal exterior turned soft and melted away to reveal skin. at this the girl was amazed as she watched all of the metal start to melt away to reveal a human boy. she was a t first joyous until she realized that this body, even though it was now human instead of robot was not breathing like she was, and unlike her the boy had a huge gash in his chest like the robot had. at this the girl put one hand over her beating heart and her other hand over the boy's and slowly his wound began to heal. when she finished healing his wound she slowly put the boy's head in her lap and gave him the sweetest kiss ever given, because with that kiss she gave a breath of life and the beat of a heart. at this the boy suddenly awoke, hazzily looking around him, but when his eyes reached her face all of his confusion melted away with his former self and he knew exactly where he was, who he was, and why he was there. they embraced each other for the first time together, even though they both knew that inside he was still the robot, and she was still the flower, they rejoiced in just having found each other. they lived for a short while, happily in each other's arms, living in each moment as if it was their very last with each other cause they knew one day that it would be. they grew closer and closer with each passing day, but the human boy that was once a robot knew that he could not be with his beautiful flower girl forever because even though his chest wound was healed and he was alive and breathing, he still had no heart, all he had was an empty beating in the hollow cave of his chest. so he knew that he had to leave her soon so she could live on a happy life, because he could not stay around her even though it made her happy at the time because he knew that she would be suffering later when she would realize what he already knew, and he knew he could not stand to see his love suffer. the next day he went off while his love was still in her slumber to make her a reminder so she would never forget the love and happiness that they had shared. he did this everyday for three weeks until the day had come when he had finally finished his work. as he was about to put it next to her sleeping head, it dawned on him that if he did this, she would never get over him and never be able to eventually move on with her life, and she would probably suffer even more having it. so even though he put all of his love into his gift, he knew he could never give it to her. with a mournful sigh he buried the gift where he first laid his heart in her ashes, and he walked away before she could see him go, before the sun arose, before either of them could say goodbye. he walked out of their valley, out of the land of the sun, out of the light of the moon, out of the sight of the stars, he kept walking until he reached the land of complete darkness, the land he was born from before he was gifted the heart. he knew that here he could not hurt anyone, especially his beloved flower that he raised from the ashes by sacrificing his own heart. the human girl arose from her sleep when the sun broke through the midnight sky and as she shook of the rest of the sleep that was covering her with a huge yawn, she reached around her expecting to feel her love beside her. when she did not find her love by touch, her eyes immediatly shot open to find him by sight. as she looked all around but still not seeing him her heart twisted uneasily inside her chest, she had to stop every couple of steps because she felt that her chest would implode. she had searched the whole valley three times over again and still had found no sight of him. tired from her search and weak from the pain her heart was giving her she collapsed on the ground near where the boy had buried his gift and as her conciousness was slipping away she heard the sweetest song her ears had ever tasted. she dragged her body towards the sound and when she finally felt the beat and melody of the sweet lullaby beneath her she started to dig with all of the strength she had left until three feet of dirt later she found the source. his gift, that he had put all of his love and energy into making. it was a music box. carved from the bark of a cherry blossom tree, and smelled of the loveliest fragrences in the world, and was designed with the ut-most care portraing on it the most beautiful flower the girl had ever seen. when the girl opened the music box the sweet song her ears had been yurning for received their sweet satisfaction as the melody played out into the sweetest of tunes that held a beautifully intricate story within itself. and in the middle of it all the girl gasped her last breath in amazement as she saw that her one love had given up the few things he had left, his breath to sufice the wonderful fragrences the girl had previously breathed in and his soul shaped into a boy and a girl holding each other in a bond that no one could break with ice and scraps of metal under their feet and petals twirling around them, the girl took all of this in with her last view of the world and breathed out a heavy sigh as she said," i love you my love, i will love you forever, from this life to the next, i give you your heart back as it has served its purpose within me and i give you the breath of eternity, for i will forever wait for your return." as soon as her breath left the boy, sitting all alone in the land of darkness, received such a pain that he was unsure of what was happening. the gash in his chest that was healed by his flower so long ago suddenly tore open again and when he looked in, he saw that his heart was back in place and his body felt indestructable and everlasting. then it came to him, her last words hit him like a tidal wave, and although he was not completly sure of what was going on he knew that he had to get back to her as fast as he could. he ran back into the sight of the stars, back into the light of the moon, back into the land of the sun but as much as he tried he could not remember where their valley lay. he wandered through the lands for what seemed like years but he could find nothing familiar to lead him back to his dying flower. in desperation and despair he called out for her from the time the sun rose to the time the sun set, but no answer came to him.he wandered in search for the love he left behind for three hundred years before he came across the cherry blossom tree he had carved his gift for her out of, he realized then and there that ven though he could hide and take away all of the things that could remind him of her but even though the years had passed and even though he had seen many other flowers beside her his memory of her never faded for a day, and he knew that it must have been the same with her also. thats when all of his heart, his strength, his spirit, his will broke in two and he realized how much he really missed her and how much he wanted to be with her. when this realiztion finally dawned upon him a gust of wind came and wrapped itself around him surrounding him with petals, and as the wind carried off in an untraveled direction, the boy followed. he followed for many miles until he came upon their valley, when he saw the valley a huge sadness swept over him, it was not as he remembered it three hundred years ago, the valley that he once knew that was covered in beautiful grasses and wonderfully grown trees and lovely fragrented flowers was now barren as if a huge fire had swept over their valley and had left everything in ashes. the only thing that stood out among the burnt remains was the musicbox. it sat in the center of the valley still playing its musical charm after all of these years, and as he slowly walked up to it he could still see his soul in the shape of the boy and the girl in the forever bond with ice and shards of metal below them and the petals around them. as he bent closer to see if the wonderful fragrence was still there he stumbled upon the dead body of his love, still as he remembered her three hundred years ago perfectly preserved in the ash. he knelt down and then scooped her up in his arms, and kissed her on the forehead, set her back down in the ashes and collapsed beside her because as she had foretold so many, amny years ago she had only given him enough breath eternal breath to come back to her, she could give no more. with the robot and the flower rejoined once more their valley flourished once again fueled by both of their breath, souls, and the one heart that had sustained them both for those many years. their spirits live together in a forever bind with ice and shards of metal below them and petals brought by the sweetlly fragrented wind inside the musicbox, listening forever to the sweet melody he had given his breath and soul for. their memory lives on in their valley forever, needing only their love for each other to sustain them..
once upon a time there was a little robot who was given the gift of a heart in exchange to go on a quest to find the most beautiful flower of the land. as the little robot searched he came upon many beautiful flowers but none were the right one, as the journey grew longer and longer, his hope started dying and his heart turned colder and colder until there was a layer of ice surrounding it. so, the little robot feeling nothing but the cold from his heart kept wandering on. one day he came upon an unfamiliar valley filled with many flowers as he started shifting through like usual he came across one little flower that looked so delicate he was afraid to touch it..at this he carefully watched the flower for many days and nights just to observe its strength, as he did this the flower became more and more beautiful to him with each passing day. one day he decided to finally touch the flower, at this the flower turned to ash and died, the lonely little robot did not know what to do, he felt so guitly for killing the little flower that he was beside himself with a feeling he had never felt before. he could feel his heart giving off a loud thump in his chest and he could feel the ice around it breaking, and suddenly he knew exactly what he had to do. he ripped open his metal exterior until he finally reached the heart, then with wires haning everywhere and metal scraps thrown to the side he dug inside himself and took the heart out ever so carefully, making sure not to break it. when he had it placed firmaly in his hands he knew he had only a few seconds before all of his systems completly shut down, so with his quickest and swiftest of movements he placed the heart in the center of the ash and buried it with the dead flowers remains. at this the now heartless little robot fell over as all of his systems shut down. when the heart was buried in the ash, a new form started to grow, and out of it came a human girl. and inside of the girl beat the heart that the lonely, heartless, little robot gave up to give the flower life again. the girl put her hands over her heart and breathed in her first breath as she felt her heart beat. when she opened her eyes she looked around at her breath-taking suroundings, and then saw the little robot lying in a pile of ice. the girl gasped at the sight of her savior and knelt down next to him to see what had become of this little robot. when she touched the little robot his hard metal exterior turned soft and melted away to reveal skin. at this the girl was amazed as she watched all of the metal start to melt away to reveal a human boy. she was a t first joyous until she realized that this body, even though it was now human instead of robot was not breathing like she was, and unlike her the boy had a huge gash in his chest like the robot had. at this the girl put one hand over her beating heart and her other hand over the boy's and slowly his wound began to heal. when she finished healing his wound she slowly put the boy's head in her lap and gave him the sweetest kiss ever given, because with that kiss she gave a breath of life and the beat of a heart. at this the boy suddenly awoke, hazzily looking around him, but when his eyes reached her face all of his confusion melted away with his former self and he knew exactly where he was, who he was, and why he was there. they embraced each other for the first time together, even though they both knew that inside he was still the robot, and she was still the flower, they rejoiced in just having found each other. they lived for a short while, happily in each other's arms, living in each moment as if it was their very last with each other cause they knew one day that it would be. they grew closer and closer with each passing day, but the human boy that was once a robot knew that he could not be with his beautiful flower girl forever because even though his chest wound was healed and he was alive and breathing, he still had no heart, all he had was an empty beating in the hollow cave of his chest. so he knew that he had to leave her soon so she could live on a happy life, because he could not stay around her even though it made her happy at the time because he knew that she would be suffering later when she would realize what he already knew, and he knew he could not stand to see his love suffer. the next day he went off while his love was still in her slumber to make her a reminder so she would never forget the love and happiness that they had shared. he did this everyday for three weeks until the day had come when he had finally finished his work. as he was about to put it next to her sleeping head, it dawned on him that if he did this, she would never get over him and never be able to eventually move on with her life, and she would probably suffer even more having it. so even though he put all of his love into his gift, he knew he could never give it to her. with a mournful sigh he buried the gift where he first laid his heart in her ashes, and he walked away before she could see him go, before the sun arose, before either of them could say goodbye. he walked out of their valley, out of the land of the sun, out of the light of the moon, out of the sight of the stars, he kept walking until he reached the land of complete darkness, the land he was born from before he was gifted the heart. he knew that here he could not hurt anyone, especially his beloved flower that he raised from the ashes by sacrificing his own heart. the human girl arose from her sleep when the sun broke through the midnight sky and as she shook of the rest of the sleep that was covering her with a huge yawn, she reached around her expecting to feel her love beside her. when she did not find her love by touch, her eyes immediatly shot open to find him by sight. as she looked all around but still not seeing him her heart twisted uneasily inside her chest, she had to stop every couple of steps because she felt that her chest would implode. she had searched the whole valley three times over again and still had found no sight of him. tired from her search and weak from the pain her heart was giving her she collapsed on the ground near where the boy had buried his gift and as her conciousness was slipping away she heard the sweetest song her ears had ever tasted. she dragged her body towards the sound and when she finally felt the beat and melody of the sweet lullaby beneath her she started to dig with all of the strength she had left until three feet of dirt later she found the source. his gift, that he had put all of his love and energy into making. it was a music box. carved from the bark of a cherry blossom tree, and smelled of the loveliest fragrences in the world, and was designed with the ut-most care portraing on it the most beautiful flower the girl had ever seen. when the girl opened the music box the sweet song her ears had been yurning for received their sweet satisfaction as the melody played out into the sweetest of tunes that held a beautifully intricate story within itself. and in the middle of it all the girl gasped her last breath in amazement as she saw that her one love had given up the few things he had left, his breath to sufice the wonderful fragrences the girl had previously breathed in and his soul shaped into a boy and a girl holding each other in a bond that no one could break with ice and scraps of metal under their feet and petals twirling around them, the girl took all of this in with her last view of the world and breathed out a heavy sigh as she said," i love you my love, i will love you forever, from this life to the next, i give you your heart back as it has served its purpose within me and i give you the breath of eternity, for i will forever wait for your return." as soon as her breath left the boy, sitting all alone in the land of darkness, received such a pain that he was unsure of what was happening. the gash in his chest that was healed by his flower so long ago suddenly tore open again and when he looked in, he saw that his heart was back in place and his body felt indestructable and everlasting. then it came to him, her last words hit him like a tidal wave, and although he was not completly sure of what was going on he knew that he had to get back to her as fast as he could. he ran back into the sight of the stars, back into the light of the moon, back into the land of the sun but as much as he tried he could not remember where their valley lay. he wandered through the lands for what seemed like years but he could find nothing familiar to lead him back to his dying flower. in desperation and despair he called out for her from the time the sun rose to the time the sun set, but no answer came to him.he wandered in search for the love he left behind for three hundred years before he came across the cherry blossom tree he had carved his gift for her out of, he realized then and there that ven though he could hide and take away all of the things that could remind him of her but even though the years had passed and even though he had seen many other flowers beside her his memory of her never faded for a day, and he knew that it must have been the same with her also. thats when all of his heart, his strength, his spirit, his will broke in two and he realized how much he really missed her and how much he wanted to be with her. when this realiztion finally dawned upon him a gust of wind came and wrapped itself around him surrounding him with petals, and as the wind carried off in an untraveled direction, the boy followed. he followed for many miles until he came upon their valley, when he saw the valley a huge sadness swept over him, it was not as he remembered it three hundred years ago, the valley that he once knew that was covered in beautiful grasses and wonderfully grown trees and lovely fragrented flowers was now barren as if a huge fire had swept over their valley and had left everything in ashes. the only thing that stood out among the burnt remains was the musicbox. it sat in the center of the valley still playing its musical charm after all of these years, and as he slowly walked up to it he could still see his soul in the shape of the boy and the girl in the forever bond with ice and shards of metal below them and the petals around them. as he bent closer to see if the wonderful fragrence was still there he stumbled upon the dead body of his love, still as he remembered her three hundred years ago perfectly preserved in the ash. he knelt down and then scooped her up in his arms, and kissed her on the forehead, set her back down in the ashes and collapsed beside her because as she had foretold so many, amny years ago she had only given him enough breath eternal breath to come back to her, she could give no more. with the robot and the flower rejoined once more their valley flourished once again fueled by both of their breath, souls, and the one heart that had sustained them both for those many years. their spirits live together in a forever bind with ice and shards of metal below them and petals brought by the sweetlly fragrented wind inside the musicbox, listening forever to the sweet melody he had given his breath and soul for. their memory lives on in their valley forever, needing only their love for each other to sustain them..
wowwwwwww .... that wuz an awesome story!! very creative!!
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